Feb 19, 2012

Jenna's life in a next chapter

In my current novel " Rules of the road" their are a tone of different things that go on during the beginning, middle, and end of the book to add on to but I will be adding onto to the chapter when Jenna (main character) meet's a new guy in Texas and how they have a friendly connection as they first meet.

In the beginning of the book, Jenna has job that she loves and let her forget about every thing that goes on in her life. This job kept her from thinking about school and how she never had to many friend because of the way that she look and how much every one like  her sister better because she was the pretty one. She was also able to somewhat forget about her dad and his drinking problems.

Tword the middle of the book, Mrs. Gladstone (owner of the "Glad Stone Shoes") starts coming into her Chicago store where Jenna currently works with Mrs. Gladstone's son. He is not the best when it come to being nice to people and when it comes to selling shoes to some people. But he's supposed to be good with profits but he thinks hes better then he really is. A lot of people would say hes conceded and a jerk thinking that he knows more and better then other people.

Near the end of the book, Jenna and Mrs. Gladstone are able to talk more with one another about the things that are currently going on in their life and lure new things about one another while they spend 6 weeks with one another while travailing from place to place to get to Texas.

My prediction is, If their was an additional chapter (29) It would tell something about how Jenna started growing up more and more along with her sister, while not hearing a word from their father or knowing anything that going on with him. But one day he would come back and look better, sound better, and be better. He took Jenna's talk with him to heart and actually go do something about his problem and become a new man. After they all start talking agen Jenna's sister starts liking/loving her father agen and forgets about all the bad things he did to them. After a while The Mother and Father would see one another after who know how many years and start talking about how much better their life would be if they got back to gather, but when the kids start to get to excited about it Mother tells him no and that she could never forgive him for what he did. The chapter end sad but good, the parents don't get back together but the daughters get their father back and no one has to worry that hes going to do something bad agen and everything become better then before.                          

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